Children of the Lens

The universe feels so rich and detailed, but I wonder if the pacing was a challenge. Did the story evolve to include more adventure or more lore as it progressed?

The depiction of their culture and technology added so much depth, but I kept wondering what real-world influences shaped these alien societies.

Switching viewpoints gave a broader view of the story, but I felt it also made some parts feel a bit disjointed. Was this a deliberate choice to show different sides of the conflict?