Did anyone else feel the story's pace slowed too much in the middle?
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Did anyone else feel the story's pace slowed too much in the middle?
What do you think motivated the intern's actions—was it desperation or something darker?
How did the author decide to reveal key secrets—was the timing deliberate to maximize suspense?