Did anyone else feel the story's pacing slowed in the middle?
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One Step Too Far

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Did anyone else feel the story's pacing slowed in the middle?
What did you think about the unreliable narrator? Did it make the story more thrilling or confusing?
How did the author decide to reveal key secrets — was it more impactful to keep some hidden until the end?