S'il n'avait pas neigé

The cold, isolating landscape adds a layer of tension—did the author intend the weather to mirror the emotional distance between characters?

The resolution left me with questions about trust and redemption. I'm curious if others felt the same sense of lingering unease.

The concise format gave it a punchy, intense feel. I wonder if the author considered expanding it or preferred the brevity to keep the tension tight.