La enfermera

The character's actions kept me guessing about their true motives. I'm curious whether this complexity was planned from the start or developed during writing.

The pacing seemed steady, but I wonder if certain scenes could have been tightened. Would love to hear others' thoughts on the story's rhythm.

The narrative was full of surprises, and I kept second-guessing what was real. I wonder what choices led to this layered storytelling approach.