The Ippos King

The magic system and lore feel deeply rooted in myth — I wonder if there were specific legends that influenced these choices or if they grew from the world-building process.

The relationship between the characters was so layered and emotional, but I kept wondering whether the romance was meant to be a slow burn or if it happened more quickly than expected.

The pacing felt well-managed, but I’m curious whether the narrative was intentionally structured to alternate between tension and tenderness or if it evolved during writing.