Stud Finder

The witty back-and-forth kept me laughing, but I wondered if it might be too much for some readers. What’s the balance between humor and genuine connection in this kind of romance?

It felt like the emotional stakes were especially strong because of their history. I’m curious whether this was inspired by personal experience or a storytelling choice to deepen the connection.

Some jokes had me laughing out loud, but others felt a bit forced. Did others feel the same, or did the humor really work throughout for most readers?