Rayo de amor

The way their friendship evolved into romance felt very authentic, but I wonder if that makes the transition more believable or too idealized.

It’s a classic theme, but the emotional depth here made it stand out. I’m curious whether this was a personal favorite to write or a deliberate choice to explore vulnerability.

The story took some time to develop the emotional stakes, which worked for me, but I’d love to know if that was intentional or just how the story naturally unfolded.