Portador de la luz

The way magic is woven into the world feels so layered, but I was left wondering how much was planned from the start versus developed as the story unfolded.

Some relationships felt natural, but others seemed to develop quickly. I'm curious if others felt the same or if it was just me missing some build-up.

The pacing kept me on edge but also gave space for the characters to breathe. Wondering whether this was a conscious choice to keep readers engaged or a natural result of the story's structure.