Das Patent

The contrast between the idyllic setting and the underlying secrets kept me hooked. I'm curious whether this was inspired by real-world tech or philosophical ideas.

The story slowed down during certain parts, but it seemed to serve the suspense. Would love to hear if others felt the same or if it picked up for them.

Switching viewpoints kept the story fresh, but I wondered if this was planned from the start or evolved during writing. It added layers but also complexity.