Begraben

The atmosphere really immerses the reader in a tense, suspenseful world. I'm curious whether this tone was planned from the start or evolved during writing.

The story moves quickly, which kept me on the edge of my seat, but I wonder if some moments could have benefited from a slower build. What do others think?

Switching between characters added layers to the mystery, but I wonder what inspired the choice to tell the story this way. Did it come naturally or was it a deliberate plan?