Sunburn

The contrast between the idyllic setting and the dark secrets lurking beneath adds tension. I wonder how much the location shaped the story's tone.

The slower sections gave space for character development, but it made me curious if this was a deliberate choice to build suspense or just natural flow.

The layered revelations kept me guessing, and I’d love to know what led to structuring the story this way rather than a more straightforward approach.