One Little Mistake

The limited point of view heightened the tension, but I wonder if it was planned from the start or evolved during writing. Did it help keep the suspense more intense?

The tension dipped a bit before picking up again, which made me curious if that was intentional to build character depth or just a natural part of the plot.

I felt some characters' histories added richness, but at times I wondered if more focus on the immediate mystery might have kept the momentum tighter.