A Shadow on the Glass

The perspectives felt distinct but interconnected, adding depth to the world. I'm curious if this structure was planned from the start or evolved during writing.

The rules seemed complex but not fully explained, which kept me intrigued. How much do you think the author planned out in advance about how magic works here?

The story's tension builds gradually, but I wondered if the slow parts served to enhance the mood or if they could have been tighter.