Let’s Play Make-Believe

The shifting viewpoints added layers of complexity and kept me guessing. I'm curious whether this approach was planned from the start or developed during writing.

I loved the gradual tension, but I wondered if certain chapters could have been tighter. Was that pacing intentional to build anticipation?

It felt like a delicate dance—enough information to engage but not enough to give everything away. I'm interested in how the author approached this challenge.