Bossy Brit

The banter between the characters was so witty and fun, but I wondered if the humor undercut some of the more intense romantic moments. What did others think about the tone?

Brit’s confidence and assertiveness really stood out, but I’m curious whether that was based on real personality traits or a deliberate choice to make her more memorable.

The novella had a natural rhythm that kept me turning pages, but I wonder if the author mapped out the pacing from the start or adjusted as they wrote.