Unnatural Magic

The magic feels both fascinating and unsettling, which adds layers to the story. I'm curious what inspired the choice to frame it as 'unnatural' rather than traditional magic.

The characters' interactions felt genuine and nuanced, avoiding many common tropes. I wonder if the author aimed to challenge typical portrayals or was just telling a story close to their heart.

There were moments where the tension built up slowly, then exploded into action. I'm curious whether this pacing was planned or evolved as the story developed.