The House on Biscayne Bay

The layered timelines added depth and mystery, but I wonder if this structure was planned from the start or evolved during writing. It really kept me guessing.

The description of Biscayne Bay and the old house created a moody, immersive setting. I’d love to hear if others felt transported or if it felt a bit too atmospheric at times.

The pacing of revelation kept the story engaging. I’m curious if this was a conscious decision to build suspense or if it naturally grew from the characters' development.