Swimming to Catalina

The island's unique atmosphere really adds to the story's tension. I wonder if the author has a personal connection or chose it for its vibe.

The story picked up again towards the end, but I felt the middle sections were a bit slow. Was that intentional to build suspense?

The narrator's perspective kept me questioning what was real, which made the mystery more immersive. I'm curious about the creative choice behind this narration style.