Hold Your Breath

The compact length kept the tension tight, but I wonder if the story would have felt different as a full-length novel. Did the format influence the storytelling approach?

The pacing felt swift at times, which heightened the suspense, but I wondered if some moments could have been developed more deeply. Was this rapid reveal intentional to maintain tension?

The shifting viewpoints added layers to the mystery, but I was curious about the process behind choosing which characters to give voice to and how that shaped the story.