Машина предсказаний

The machine's mysterious nature adds a layer of intrigue—I'm curious whether it was a core concept from the start or developed later in writing.

The buildup feels intense but also stretches out at times—was that intentional to build suspense or a result of world-building choices?

The way characters grapple with destiny versus choice really resonated with me. Would love to hear thoughts on how this theme evolved during writing.