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Switching between two protagonists with intertwined fates kept me hooked, but I wonder if that was planned from the start or evolved during writing.

The way magic interacts with power felt fresh but also a bit overwhelming at times. How did others navigate understanding the rules of this world?

Some chapters dipped into detailed lore that slowed the action, but I wonder if that was meant to deepen the immersion or if it could be trimmed for tension.