The Broken

The shifting perception kept me guessing about what was real and what was manipulated. I'm curious whether this was planned from the start or evolved during writing.

The atmosphere grew more charged with each revelation, making me wonder how much of that was intentional pacing versus character development. Did others feel the same push and pull?

The story delves deeply into the characters' minds, but I wondered if the suspense sometimes overshadowed their emotional journeys. Would love to hear others' thoughts.