Trace - Part One

The opening chapters immediately pull you into a whirlwind of feelings. I wonder if this was a deliberate decision to hook readers or based on a personal experience.

The tension and intimacy felt so real, I kept wondering how much of that was drawn from real relationships or pure imagination. Did others feel the same connection?

Listening to the story added an extra layer of intimacy, but I’m curious if the narration choices made the scenes more vivid or if they could have been handled differently.