Hoe het allemaal begon

The story packed a lot of feelings into a short span, but I wondered if the pacing affected the buildup of suspense or character development.

Choosing to focus on the day before a major event creates a sense of urgency. I'm curious whether this was a deliberate choice to heighten tension or if it evolved during writing.

The chemistry was palpable, but some moments felt rushed or underdeveloped. Did anyone else feel like the romance added depth or detracted from the mystery?