The Girl Who Sees

The story introduces some intriguing abilities, but I was left wondering how the magic actually works behind the scenes. Did others wish for more world-building details?

Her ability to see supernatural things created some great tension, but I wonder if the author planned this duality from the start or let it evolve during writing.

The chemistry was there, but the relationship development seemed quick given the stakes. Did others feel the romance could have been more fleshed out?