Our Fault

The push and pull kept me hooked, but sometimes it felt like they were on the edge of crossing lines. Did that make anyone else uncomfortable or was it part of the charm?

It added depth but also made me wonder how much of her identity was shaped by her history. Do you think revealing her backstory early or later would have changed the impact?

The story felt both passionate and introspective, but I’m curious whether that balance was planned from the start or if it emerged during writing.