Magic on the Storm

The pacing shifts between intense magic battles and tender moments, which kept me hooked. I'm curious if that was a deliberate choice or evolved during writing.

I loved how the magic felt tangible and unique, but I had to reread some parts to fully grasp the rules. Did others find it accessible or a bit dense?

The environment feels so alive and atmospheric, making the magic and characters stand out. I wonder if real-world storms or folklore influenced the world-building.