Kiss of The Night - Kecupan Malam

The mythological aspects added depth and intrigue, but I'm curious whether this was a deliberate world-building choice or evolved naturally during writing.

The emotional stakes felt high, especially with the darker themes. Did the mood enhance the romantic tension for others as well?

Some parts felt slower, but I wondered if that was to build character or tension. What do others think about how it affected the story’s flow?