Don't Make a Sound

The intense focus on the main character's point of view really immerses the reader in the suspense. I'm curious if this was a deliberate choice to heighten tension or if it evolved during writing.

The story had a strong start and finish, but the middle felt a bit slower for me. I wonder if that was to build suspense or if there's another reason behind it.

The story's tension escalates well, but I’d love to know how the author approached balancing plot momentum with emotional depth.