Blue Lily, Lily Blue

The shifting perspectives kept me immersed but also made it hard to keep track at times. I'm curious if this was planned from the start or evolved during writing.

The subtle build-up added a layer of tension that felt very genuine. I wonder if the author intended to keep it low-key or if it developed naturally.

The world feels so richly imagined — I’d love to know if real locations or myths influenced the magic system and landscape.