Magic on the Line

The way magic is woven into everyday life adds a lot of depth. I'm curious whether this was planned from the start or developed as the story evolved.

I was rooting for certain characters, but the shifts in their relationships kept me on my toes. Was that intentional to keep the tension high?

The pacing felt quite smooth, but I wonder if the emphasis on world-building slowed down some moments or if it was a deliberate choice.