Dear Child

The story kept me guessing but also made me uneasy with how layered the secrets were. Did the plot twists feel earned or a bit too contrived?

The pacing and mood really pulled me in, but I wonder what specific choices created that feeling of constant suspense. Was it the narrative structure or the language?

Switching between characters added depth but also complexity. I'm curious whether this was planned from the beginning or something that emerged during writing.