Did anyone else feel the story's pacing slowed in the middle, or was that intentional?
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Did anyone else feel the story's pacing slowed in the middle, or was that intentional?
What did you think about the reveal at the end — did it feel satisfying or a bit rushed?
How did the author decide to structure the story through multiple perspectives?
