Harley Merlin and the First Ritual

Her sudden realization seemed a bit quick for me — I wonder if this was a deliberate choice to keep the story fast-paced or if it could have been fleshed out more.

The mix of everyday life and magical elements felt seamless, but I’m curious whether this contrast was planned from the start or evolved during writing.

The chemistry was intense but came together surprisingly quickly. Did anyone else feel like it could have used more build-up or development?