Fathomfolk

Their blend of beauty and danger added so much depth to the story. I'm curious whether this mythos was based on existing legends or completely invented.

I loved the world-building, but the slower moments made me wonder if they were essential for character growth or if they could be trimmed for tension.

Switching between worlds kept me hooked, but I wonder what led to the choice of narrative structure—was it a challenge to balance both viewpoints?